Monument Soul

Thanks guys I'll see what I can do!

well this is a prose. prose isn't built around flow. I didn't find a prose section any where.

I have not visited this website in years...I have been flying around the internet bored to insanity until I alighted on this story and saw the forest around. I am ...

there is a theme of time and death. and I am only witnessing it seeping into my life. this is an interpretation of true events. I guess it would've done ...

for some reason there's no space between my matter how I edit it :?

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this a true story or are you just using the premise to a dramatic effect.

Er...I liked the concept within itself (as in the story being told). I am just curious as to why you believed formatting and schemes were unnecessary? Punctuation and other grammar ...

uuuughhh.....sure but I write like this on purpose, almost by nature... I just got tired of people makin' a big sh*t out of it.

I like how you use the term "real talk" and based a piece around it. I have to say that I like the concept but the delivery was really off. ...

:? any questions? as to my reasoning in writing this

out in the center of existence slept the all of everything, the Alpha Omega Alpha GOD upon his awakening The universe exploded into existence and activity in one BIG BANG. ...

I think I have it now... strange story...very very interesting...I guess it's pretty good... I'd like to see more of you...then I'll understand your character... this writing is a secret ...

I think that your concept is a bit much of it....this doesn't belong to poetry for its style... I mean, this ruins your rhythm totally...actually there isn't any rhythm... This ...

There's something very special about this poem. I don't know what, maybe it's the slight abstractness of it, maybe it's the fact that it's on a huge level (if taken ...